There is an uproar
in my heart
I am a binary star
with both stars fighting
each other
The white side
was always
submitting;
The black side
was simply too strong
But now
there is an uproar
in my heart
The white side
wants to change
the way I act;
The black side
wants to stay the same
There is an uproar
in my heart
The white side
gathers followers
to reinforce its demands;
The black side
is still too strong
There is an uproar
in my heart
The white side
grows more impatient
and wants to overthrow
The black side’s
reign
There is a revolution
in my heart

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Friday, 2nd April 2010 at 15:28
slpmartin
Very nice way to express internal conflict…I like the way you balanced the two sides discussion…good poem.
Saturday, 3rd April 2010 at 05:53
Salivia Baker
thank you for your comment!
I found it difficult not to sound too boring with this poem.
Saturday, 10th April 2010 at 00:41
andi
its great poetry, keep posting
Sunday, 11th April 2010 at 16:46
latinaHotGirl
Good post!
Wednesday, 14th April 2010 at 04:17
4proof
I love these types of little updates they change the pace of things… much needed. Good job and thanks